My novel is set in a modern dystopia, where the details of how society is ordered is gradually revealed.
The story centers around a young man and his boss, who has a not-insignificant power over him. She asks him to take actions which are increasingly morally and legally ambiguous and it is the consequence of this which makes the story.
My current issue is I've read the damn thing so many times, I've lost the ability to "see" what a new reader would know, and whether the implied threat is great enough to affect his actions. Does anyone have any tips? Or fancy a read?!
I'm reluctant to give it to friends and family to read at this stage due to all the usual issues regarding biased or kindly reviews!
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stripyeyes · 04/05/2016 11:50
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