How do you write it down/convey when a character starts to say one word and abruptly changes it to another?
e.g. Character wants to say: "You have a very sexy voice."
Thinks better of it and changes to: "You have a verymusical voice."
But part of the word sexy is articulated, so:
"You have a very sec- musical- voice."
Is there a way to make this stylistically clear to the reader?
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ComradePlexiglass · 27/11/2014 07:00
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