Before Mass yesterday Fr McNab approached me and told me that someone I did the church flowers with died on Friday. She was only in her early 50s, and apparently only knew she was ill for 4 weeks. I've never written a sympathy card before. Would you comment on this for me please?
Dear P,
I was greatly saddened to hear at Mass yesterday morning of your terrible loss.
Although I didn't know H for very long, I always enjoyed her company whenever we met.
If there is anything at all I can do please let me know.
I just wanted you to know that I'm thinking of you at this sad time, and am praying for you both.
Regards,
C
It sounds rubbish to me. Any ideas how I can make it sound better? TIA
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earlgrey · 03/07/2006 06:27
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